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May 19, 2011 | 7:20 AM EDT
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3.1 MB
1 min 22 sec
4.40 / 5.00

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Rated 4.40 / 5 stars
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Just another out of hundreds of things im making in order to train myself :D



Rated 3 / 5 stars


not bad.

Deshiel responds:

That is good to hear :)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It needs more.

I'm giving you a 7/10 because the talent and recognition of genre is there, but I don't feel like this is a true techno song. It has no progression really and it needs a good bass, this is just more like like a techno synth piece that could be incorporated into a greater song. That and at the end of it gets a bit dodgy, I don't know if it was intentional but I feel it skips too much. Other then that criticism, you're quite talented and I can't wait until I hear more of your works.


Deshiel responds:

I still have the whole thing stored as flp. so future incarnation could be possible.

Thing is that when I've made this one. I didn't realy know much about the program that I used for its creation.

Anyway thanks for the comment :)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good job

I hope your next thousand lyrics are as good as this

Deshiel responds:

Thousand :D :D

Well yeah ;D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good foundation

Now that you've developed a good beat, I'd like to hear some melody. Maybe test with some melodies for your next "training"?

Deshiel responds:

yeah melodies... :D


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice work

If this is training, I'd love to see what you make after you train.

Deshiel responds:

I sleep ^^