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Have been trying to improve my song making skills, and I am really looking for any feedback that will help me improve this song, and future songs.
Made in FL Studio 9
Good good good
Although the start kind of scared me for a moment due to the loud mouse like sound paired with the drum clapping rhythm too. Then the bubbles make it sound cool which made me smile a bit. This song just has a strange atmosphere to it.
I would love to see this used in an underwater based game anyways since it sounds like it would be something played while you explore an underwater level actually. Kind of feels cool when the bass comes in as well.
Overall, cool underwater feeling song.
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yeah sorry about the very start, I probably should've faded that in but oh well..
Thanks for the feedback though!
There isn't much to complain about here, all I can really say is keep up the good work.
Your structure is nice, and so is your flow.
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ALOT better from your last track, You have a structure, you got a sound. Effects. An idea even!
Good work! Il keep checking in for your other tracks. But comared to "The Game" this is much much MUCH better.
What i can give critic on is the still abit TO generic sound on the synts, That is something you gotta work away from.
Other than that, Good work! You deserve it!
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it :)
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