I still have some tweaking to do and I need to add another bass-line for the cello part. I'm putting this up for suggestions on how you think it could be better, please feel free to give constructive criticism, this is the second draft now. i made the lead lower and a tad more complex than last time.
Bum Paper-Rip, Bum Paper-Rip, Bum Paper-Rip...
Not bad the hat(?) that sounds like someone ripping paper is a bit harsh, but I'm willing to overlook that, because the rest of the song is pretty freaking awesome! Have you heard the original version? (Not the piano one, but the techno one) If not you should, this song made me want to give that version another listen ^_^
Keep up the great work! 5/5 9/10
Great.
10 stars,Gread Job my friend.
This is really awesome :)
I love you for making this.
Overall, a really good track. When I first started listening, I thought it would end up being waaay too slow, but then it picked up and the rest of the song really flowed well. I love the choice of synths, as well. I still feel like it could be sliiiiightly faster, but don't listen to me, because I'm pretty amateur when it comes to this kind of music.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
joethesouleater 
