Hot
This is hot. The melody is sick as hell. Shit I wish I though of it.
The beat was real tight and kept the song moving. I also like the bassline. I think it should be louder. But I think you should use a different string for the pulsing ones in the back. A lot of people work with FL, so to us the strings seem sort of generic. Try the Sytrus strings.
Real Muthafuckin talk
~Holla~