Well this is not my usual style, I tend to go for more rock and electronic than hip hop.
But I'm at my best when I experiment, so I went out of my comfort zone and tried this on...and I was pleased with the result of learning a new technique.
I think this could be used as a backdrop for a rap battle, or to pretty much any tense standoff situation.
Overall pretty welldone!
I thought it was a very entertaining piece that you have here. I gave you 5-hand so that perhaps you can get some others to check out your piece. It did feel somewhat empty; however I still think overall it was well done as a barebones version. Looking forward to what you have next. I'm sure it'd be a great dancing piece.
Thank you so much, people are so negative anymore that submissions either get all fives or all ones and zeros, so I really appreciate the help. And yeah, a dance song sounds good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
AngelofPeace 
