Not bad. Missing some "Umph"
This is actually one of the more bearable versions of this I can listen too. While the sound of the drums and the guitar are perfect, as well as the "ahhs," I do believe that the "beeping" could be changed to something less "robotic," per say. Also, this seems to be missing some major base (maybe a bass guitar as well as stronger base drums?). Not to mention that the guitar in the main theme (the one that's on and off) seems to sometimes be off-key, and could be a better sound as well.
Other than that, you did a good job. Most people just use awful or annoying sounds; and believe me, your music isn't nearly as painful as theirs, even though it can still use some work. I will say though, it has much improved indeed, over many other versions.
My ruling
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8/10
4/5
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If you plan on a 3.0, keep my suggestions in mind; even some of the little stuff can make or break a song, and the critiques like what I mentioned earlier can be those things. I do encourage you to make a 3.0 to blow me away and make more beautiful music.