hmmm...

a kinda progressive trance thing... nice. i guess the cheesy part wildekeizer may be talking about, is the disco like build up in the beginning,..,maybe... i do agree with him about the climax of this song, needs a little more work in it.

anyway, 5/5 9/10 not bad! :)

DJ~CLYME

Noob music indeed.

This song is not too bad. I like the arpeggio melody. Something is weird about this song though. It is cheesy, but it is also not cheesy. I don't know how you did that.

I would suggest working on the transitions and a better arrangement. It lacked a climax, which was disappointing to me.

Keep at it. Could you review back on my song? Criticism is appreciated.

Wilde