This song is still very much in the developmental stage, I didn't do much editing except nearing the end. I really am only posting it to see if it's worth finishing. I really like the end, but the beginning is a bit shotty. I'm not sure if I should rewrite the beginning. This was a quick one-take song, except (like I said) for the end. Anyway, let me know if it's worth the time to make a new version.

The lyrics are based on a story I've been writing for over a year. I don't know what else to say really, so please listen and be constructive in your criticism. I would like to get better as a songwriter, and can only do so knowing exactly what does and doesn't work. thank you, Braksnen.