Yeah, more kick
The main melody is fine, but the kick needs to be much heavier with more punch as well a bass line (as ClimbLadders said). Other than that, you're perfect.
-Tyland777
3rd update for those who didnt know. Im always taking comments and adding what I can. please leave a comment if you think or notice somthings out of place or what u think will make it better k thanks bai. lol.
Yeah, more kick
The main melody is fine, but the kick needs to be much heavier with more punch as well a bass line (as ClimbLadders said). Other than that, you're perfect.
-Tyland777
It was okay.
Of course remix of that classic is always nice to hear, but the problem is that:
-It needs just more work
-Louder basskick, or bassline
There was effort but it could've been better. My opinion.
Needs more power
I think it would sound much better if it had more bass. Its now kinda weak
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.