Good try

Heres my review. I take it you haven't had fl too long. When making music try to avoid using presets and loops the become Cliché and unintresting. Most people around here hate them and often vote zero if they hear them so there is a word of advice. I see you were going for a deep bass effect but it didn't work too well with the detune and sounds like a change in tempo. Try makeing the bassline in tune and adding a reveerb to it, then use a paramatic Eq to make a better sound. From what people have told me about DnB has about a 170 to 240 tempo try and keep it around there. Try and avoid doppy sounding basslines go for a saw like, square or funky they seem to work for me. There's myy input if you have msn I could give you more advice if you want mine is armofdeath9@hotmail.com

Man...

The off beat kick was cool, but I strongly dislike the DrillNBase from fruity loops :P Make your own instruments, I guess that's alot better then that annoying DrillNBase snare... A bit vague, a bit unclear, but you have potential :) Keep em commin :)

Greetz,
Runaway

Usually im not this mean.

Alright, the drumloop + that deep kick sort of thing, did fit at all... sorry dude. thats why i voted 3. :)

-tF
P.S. CHECK OUT MY MUSIC!!

Well dude...

I liked it BUT you should of made the PACE a bit faster then this song would of kicked so much ASS! The drums was a bit nice but...that extra kick you put in this was a bit off. But it was still cool though so keep it V man!

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OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG

OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG,arent all the sounds in this song standard fl samples? maybe u could come over in the weekend then we will make some better numbers than the sh*t we made in our first week of audio creating

the song was really good thats why i gave u 4 OMFG's
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