lol hi seifire

such a nice guy he is tis why we are friends

im not gona be so nice lol sorry

for a first its not bad there is some mastering problems here and there but it being your first you probably didnt even master anyways

it doesnt flow very well but thats ok too i guess

you need to focus more on trying to have multiple layers and have them all work together

Good

For ur first time thats pretty good