its ok . . .

When I saw it on the charts as high as it was, I was expecting a little more. Actually a lot more to be honest. I think the entire beat was off tune. It just didn't flow together. And what's up with the off beat piano? The tittle was quite appropriate though.

You should work on the melody a little more. Most of the time, every instrument has to be on the same chord to sound right. Why is there a quite spot after every 4 bars? Music stops and all you hear is the off beat piano.

It just doesn't sound like you put much effort into this.

nice strings..

but they dont go with hip hop...i like tha kicks, but turn up tha snare a bit, and change tha note on tha piano, it gets annoying...
equalize better wit it, it sounds too loud.

keep workin at it, hip hop is harder to master than people think