I'm not sure how I feel about this completely.

By all means this is not a bad track at all. I'm not sure how I feel about the original high pitch bendy noise its all based off of though, kind of slices into the ears a bit.

Nevertheless, it's a pretty solid track. The dynamics could probably use some improvement, specifically with the piano, and the general mix as a whole kind of blends almost too much to carry a dominant melody, with the exception of some parts of course, which are stronger than others.

Good use of pans, also good use of note bending.

Keep at it, you're definitely on your way to making some very solid and unique sounding music.