Another new HipHop track. If I get enough reaction, I'll make the full version. Don't hesitate to write a review if you have some criticism, I'll be glad to change a few things to make this better. :)
Enjoy!
i was sleeping on Tfree but no more
You bring that heat to ng through ya fire beats my n***a. You got my support the shit you doing is hot!
- Mr. Big Bad Almighty Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- A-GANG (Almighty Gangster Records)
- Real-Over-Fake (Approved)
Thanks for the kind words and the support, will do my best to not disappoint you with new beats. Stay tuned!
Inspiring
I really liked this. I want to produce something other than trance and this song inspires me. Good job.
I'm looking forward to your try, thanks for reviewing! :]
pretty great
the only criticism i have is that i dont really like the main melody. idk whether its strings or what but it just sounds weird to me. the rest of the beat is great. i look forward to hearing the finished product. hopefully when its done i can spit some bars to it. overall great work.
Thanks and yeah I'll work on the strings a bit. I'm looking forward to working with you again, your previous lyrics on one of my older songs were epic. Great to get a review by you. :)
I sense a lyric... heartbeats grinding cooly
make it trade out the cycle, lengthen it and culminate with exactly what you have at the end... I like the flow of it, but the length is the only thing I dont quite feel- I could possibly give you something better than this:
feel that there, feel you here?
combine our tears, lube my gears.
organically machining fears,
pulsing away towards
gaining ground upon
whisking up the put upon
I feel flight when I walk together
willing that there is another
my salvation attempts
no deliverance or redemt's
solidly I break apart,
gasping for the will to again make it start
I clutch at my stomach,
I am an army with a cooled heart
walking my deathless gate
I cannot seem to participate
reaching for my higher levels,
I realize I cannot metamorphisize
growing only in decomposition
indeed my experience chips away to form the bevels
do I push away from all or am the ostrasize
catch me hanging with who be dissin'
"I" but a word to describe myself
within the artistry of carving winds
call me off from this descent?
realize I am not diving
for I am jumping off society's shelf
my life unspoiled has taken the bend
tiring from those things you find decent
I pulled myself off and now on a path, yes driving
hope into the center of my soul
and the corners of my mind
where it is that you shall find that I reside
separate but alive
gripping that which's circuits be trippin'
can you inject my with something this hole?
because I am not the orange beneath its rind
I pulse against and within but still stand beside
insulate my self only through the will to survive
but how many boiling pots must I be dipped in?
I want a lesson,
but I cannot seem to learn it fast
indeed, their affects lessen
as I fail to remember the past...
It would be great...
... If you made the full version. 10/10, 5/5, etc ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
T-Free 
