This is a HOLY SHIT indeed! I love it!

It's really good but...

I really enjoy this song guys and it's nice to hear some music in this audio portal with singing that doesnt sound like an absolute train wreck. The song is nicely done and the auto-tuning sounds good. However, it is really short and it feels like it is lacking an ending... it sort of just dies abruptly at the end there. Also, I would recommend giving your songs a bit more structural variety to keep people interested. Slow it down or add a break in there somewhere to keep the tempo from staying uniform throughout.

And hey, please don't let the trolls get you down. Some of us here actually have constructive criticism to give and want to hear the musicians who post on Newgrounds share their talent. Keep up the good work fellas and please keep posting.

-EscapingZoo

wow some useless comments u got there

there just jealous bcuz there talent-less faggs who know nothin bout muzik
dont let them get to u cuz like i said talentless faggs

Well

Seth and Russ,

Seriously, I think you've got MUCH talent! Don't listen to them.
This is seriously something that's good enough to appear on the radio.
Keep producin, don't give up already.

I think you posted it in the wrong genre, dance-music-fans don't like this kind of music.

Maybe mix your style with something more electronic? dance-able? or dnb/breakbeat maybe? idk.. so more people (on NG) will like it.
It's like playing a hard drum N bass track on the popradio, nobody will like it (I think), most of those people only listen to pop, same with the opposite.

So keep producin', maybe on Youtube, because there are more people who're into this genre of music.

My English kinda sucks, but what I'm trying to say is: if most people here don't like your music, then it's not the music that's bad, but it's the people who don't like the style.

~2DPolygon

Well...

I'm going to be dead damn honest, I though this was extremely boring. It's just another generic sounding song that thinks its edgy by talking about sluts. Songs should be fun, interesting, or hopefully both. This song is just missing a really good hook.