Zero Voters...

Will probably be a staple of NG for as long as its around. Anyway, I enjoy the melodies you have going on in this. Kinda catchy. Takes awhile to get going though, which makes me a sad panda :P

I feel if you got the song moving a bit faster, I don't necessarily mean increase the bpm by that but if you want to you might as well, and varied it up by adding maybe a counter melody or a bridge the song could be truly awesome. Cause right now its the same throughout and while what is there is good, you should add more good.

So excellent work, and keep at it mate :)

There will always be

Zero voters. Just keep making music and listening to the few helpful comments that come your way.

I really love when the song finally gets going around 1:22 . I felt like it died too fast though =[ . Maybe try to smooth your transitions so that it doesn't seem like you're just dropping a track when slowing down.

=D