Not to be a jack ass here...But the original held much more of a beat and hype to the game's theme when you're pushing for those LIMIT break Levels on Disc 1...or going for those Enemy Skills for easy AP grinding...oh yes, I went there LMAO!
While your composition is very original, and FLAWLESS I might add, I can not grant you a full 5 stars...due to the lack of energy. This piece maintains its ambience and overall flow with no drop or pick-me-up...and lacks a "unique" twist for a revision/composition, and you're fade-out is to be desired, as it doesn't mesh with the intro.
Don't take this as a HARSH BLOW to your ego, but take it as an insight when you go to revise or make a unique composition to Jenova Absolute or One Winged Angel...or dare I say, Cosmo Canyon (red Xiii's redux)...or Seto's Theme?
Keep at your vices and PUSH ON THROUGH!!!!!