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Anyways, this is a stereo-typical sad song I composed for my music class. Enjoy.
Ratings and reviews are appreciated. Only constructive criticism please. I'll return the favor :).
Edit: Now remastered :D.
I like how you didn't 5 it yourself lol
If your the one in the music class you should be giving me criticism, but I will try and help you as much as I can :) lol.
at :51 and :58 in the piano I heard a few notes that just didn't fit very well... Like it fell out of key.
1:50 was probably my favorite part :) It just flowed very nice right there.
over all I liked what I heard, but it was missing some drive, like some beat to it. Even a shaker or some type of background to keep the beat and what not, though for this genre that might kill it, so you may disregard this lol.
There was a lack of lower end bass, which could be done with a cello or some type of string instrument to compliment the higher end violin, that usually sounds great, and if it's volume is compressed a lot it will sound ambient and fill in the spectrum very nicely :) I think XD
Really enjoyed it!
Yeah, I know. I was dying to add some more instruments to it, but we were only allowed to use two as a restriction.
At :51 it was probably because I used a ii-diminished chord to add some variety to the chord progression. At :58 I switch from a minor* 5th to a diminished 7 chord (I sharped the 7th inbetween the chords) to add some suspense to it, in an attempt keep people drawn into the music.
Thanks a lot for the review :), I'll keep all that in mind and possibly make a few touch-ups before it's played live.
Nice avatar btw.
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