had potential i guess

but it needs some improvements. the difference between the beginning and the end was giant- the end was way better. if you could just start out with how you ended this song and keep building to the end. the reason im reviewing this is that this ong would be awesome if you tweaked it a little. sooooo
-the beginning wasnt very catchy because you repeated that first part twice. whatever.
- the bass line got really boring really quick. maybe you could change the notes, add another bass line, or change however you like it, but the point is, CHANGE IT!!!
- i didnt feel like there was enough things going on at once- empty space if you know what I mean. ***the beginning should be as good as the end*** :-)
- try adding a REAL counter melody. there was kind of a guitar going but i wouldnnt label that a counter melody.
- this song got very repetitive. the bass line that began around 0:43 got old after the first time- it wasnt all that exciting anyways. maybe you should have just taken out. the only good thing was that it took you away from the main theme for a few seconds.
- overall, this song was just kinda repetitive. REPETITIVE!
- oh yeah, i forgot to say the end just kinda faded away, nothing exciting or intense or anything, it just kinda ended.

***AIGHT IM DONE***

Me mi mo

This is great very repeditive tho still good.

Did you you use the slayer in FL studio?
unless you didnt use Fl

Any way I gave it an 8.

I hope to see more tunes.

Not bad...

I liked it, at first. However the part where the bass goes on by itself got kind of boring, but your friends were right about the end.

The Guitar Rules

This doesn't have that beautiful mood found in groove boat. The guitar is amazing, though. Got a haze in my head, gotta meditate some, can't write more.

-Extracy-