You've got something here.

I like this main riff, it's got a devastating sort of quality, and it's like a demolisher. I believe you're using real guitars here, but I could be wrong.

Although, I have some problems with the guitar tone. I understand electro metal tends to be way out there on EQ, but for this guitar track, it keeps peaking so it gives a rather annoying warble at the upper tips and edges of the ears that may deter other people from enjoying it all the way. Maybe try reducing volume in the future? Or try not to abuse your EQing like you have here too hard lol.

The section in the middle when you sustain on a chord and the drums keep thumping away is cool. Some people hate the volume cutting from other instrument layers suddenly gaining all the volume, but I kind of like it, even though it's common in pop these days. If in the future you want to avoid that, use a compressor if you were not aware of that, but I'm not trying to lecture you, sorry. D:

Anyway, other points of interest were the keyboard effects floating around were cool; the snare's reverb was dirty and sweet. (By the way, nice job using an electronic set.) And the ending was interesting to me, I don't exactly know why, but it just falls right apart real fast, I liked that.