Looking good so far...
It holds promise, for sure. I would suggest starting without the bleep and working your way up, only kicking it in at the high point of the song. Also, at about the 15 sec. mark I would throw in some hats on both the right and left, and then maybe a ride cymbal a few bars later to give a more driving rythem.... and then eventually progressing back down.
Whatever you do, its an interesting start. I'll give it a solid 8 for a WIP. Keep it up.