I'm pretty proud of this one but feel free to be brutally honest, crush my spirit, and even give me bad ratings without so much as a simple reason why or even a pointer on what I might be able to do to help make the song better because I've grown used to it on here.

Honestly though I myself am a bit skeptical about the hard dance beat near the end. I was thinking of leaving it out but it kind of seems fitting so let me know if you think it should stay or go.