Critique.

Okay, this is a great song, to be honest and clear.

The only concern is, that the timing for the flute and the BnD synthesizing is a wee bit off. Just a tiny bit, but not too much. While the other things are perfectly in sync, it DOES sound like it's a problem with the strings.

Otherwise, I really do see the potential in the song and in the artists itself.

Either than that... Keep up the good work!