its the best song yet

Hey

wats up

Matt

Needs a little tweaking

While a very nice mix mind you, it does resemble a train wreck. I honestly don't like the changed melody of the bells... BUT your choice of channels and your originality is very nice! I think you throw in the melody at the wrong time as well... try to sync that with the counter melody. If ya don't get what I'm saying the melody is the opening tune, while the part going down chromatically is the counter melody. Don't get me wrong though, I'm judging this harshly because I think it could be very good!! Your bassline and beat are perfect.

^a10

Very Interesting...

I have to tell ya that this is very interesting... I love this song in it's original form, and it's cool to hear your spin on it.

Things to work on for next time-
-Mastering seems a little off.

LOL That's it. Great piece!

Seek ye redemption for the sin of conformity.

AS