Not good..

the song's not really that good. it's way too repetitive, and the drum loop gets annoying in the break. you really dragged it out too long. if you worked on it a bit more, you could probably bring it somewhere, but as it is it's bad. and what's with the yelling in the background? it's awful. eliminate that altogether in your new version, if you decide to go through with it.

I bet your life sucks

mmmmmsort of shitty. I mean, you only wrote one part to the song, and the rest of it was an overused drum loop that had a painfuly long break before ti looped again and a sound clip from scarface. I suppose this deserves some sort of recognition or award, right? Please, I spit on you.
Try again

N!GGERS RULE

YOU JUST MADE MY DAY BETTER WHITE BOY.