Pretty Much...
...what I expected. You really enjoy writing slow lyrical pieces. I enjoy them immensely, but I must say it would be nice to see more energy in one of your pieces.
That being said, I enjoyed this piece. I think you would be better served to buy a more professional sounding sample library. I'm not sure what you are using these days, but there are some great options I would be happy to discuss with you. Because right now your samples are hurting you. Because with slow pieces every note is scrutinized far more because the listener has time to pick them apart.
As for what is written, I like it a lot. At 2:20-2:22 you might want to look at your chord structure though. Something sounded slightly off there.
I really like the build up after that though. at 2:57-2:59 I think I heard another odd chord. Maybe I'm just hearing things cause it's late and I'm tired. But go back and have a listen and make sure you wrote what you intended in those moments.
4/5 and 8/10 overall. Nice work bud.
-Gravey-
PenguinSam 
