If you want to compare to the first one it's at: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/375481
I went through and tried to add more character, variation, and make it a little more interesting.
Changed the beat to a more rock/power sound. I think that the snares only melt in towards the climax.
And about that, sorry that the climax and drop aren't as great or long lasting as the wait puts you through.
I hope you find it worth it to listen to.
And I also hope you find some criticism for me as well ^^

Still working on it and still learning, that's what I'm at least trying to do...

plus, they keep changing the little box over where you fill in this comment stuff, what it says sometimes.... it's starting to worry me...