Still the same doodle, is this an improvement?
Nice start
This is really nice.
Do continue working on it, let the waves return sometimes in the song, like every 8th beat with fade out, or randomly, but let them return sometimes, it makes it more fun, and you could make a kick off using orchestrals, something really grabbing.
Nice nice nice start.
Thank you very much for your kind review. I'm still a total newbie, but I suppose I need to get a better tool than Garageband if I'd do something orchestral. :)
Need to meet some more people (I think I know where I can find them) and get the right gear. Just need a sort of "jump-start". Whatever, I'll see what happens to this piece...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
jtza8 
Nakanaloa 
kywy13 
Zephnya 
NitroOrient 
