dtyjrtyhst

overused patterns and loops is mostly what i noticed, while you can make songs out of loops it wont truly be yours until you make your own patterns and at least mod your synths. Not a bad mix the intro was like a cheese grater to the face though, alot of note clashes but it got better after that, the song overall isnt bad but pretty good for a 1st song. keep at it but try making your next one without loops ;)

-Mothman