Excellent

Excellent melody keep up the good work =)
deathkllr84 doesn't know what he's talking about
and he's jealous of your talent

Wow

It melody is very exciting!!
I love it :)
-Your smile

generic dance....

with stock samples and fl studio presets. Did you even put effort into this?

It's good

It's good, I like it, but you still need to do some mastering. Like said below, it missed the epic factor. That's because the kick is not strong enough, and the offbeat bass has to jump out some more. Also, the clap panned to the left doesn't seem like a good idea too me.
I'd suggest you EQ the kick, maybe layer it, just to make it sound more punchy. The offbeat bass just needs some more volume, and the clap would be sounding a lot better when it wasn't panned on the far left.
The melodies are great, it just needs some more epic, right now it sounds a bit like everything has the same velocity.
This has potential, keep it up! :D

Good

Ok, this song is good. I really enjoyed listening to it. However, there are some things which... Could be better. I don't really know where you could put it. But I never had some kind of... Wow, epic factor. If you get what I'm saying. And I thought the clap was too flat, so try and pick another one in your following songs.

Hope this helped a bit.

8/10
4/5

Keep it up.