I've reached awesomeness.

I can tell that the whole song was fashioned around a single melody, but what I truly like about the piece is how that one melody has so many variations throughout. Every time the song has a new segment, it is a different variation of the same melody with various strings/percussion beats and it all flows seamlessly. I'm not saying the piece is absolutely perfect, but very well done. If this was your first attempt at composing a piece I commend you for your efforts and look forward to hearing more songs in the future.