Bass line playing catch up

I don't know, could be me but I believe the bass line throws the piece off a little with the speed. Its like its attempting to play catch up.

Good start

Really good song i was feeling it. almost like the feel of "fireflies" by that owl band. I think you should change the beat though as it doesn't seem to fit the song and the melody needs to change up, a little bit of strong sturucture?