Well this is just a little song i made with the FL Studio Demo Version... please tell me what you think and i am open to advice... feel free to use this song in anything just give credit to me...
Well...
The composition seems fine, but Slayer is a terrible choice for an instrument. Use any of the many other synths available in FL Studio, or make your own if you know how. I think there was way too much reverb on the piano, and not nearly enough on the drums. Also, this pretty much uses the same melodies and instruments throughout; try adding more varation. This will make the song much more appealing.
... i didnt use slayer?... i used dark guitar and piano... but i agree i should use more variation... how do u make your own synth? can u do that on the demo version? ill use more instruments on my next composition... im very new to digital music so thankyou for the advice......
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
ianross 
