Freedom and Funk

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Freedom and Funk

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So I made another one. Only I think this is my first properly good one. It uses a guitar, piano, bass, drums, and there's even a gong in there.

Also, there's a guitar solo, a bass solo, a piano solo, and sort of a drum solo, but not in that order. I'd like to think this is a song about a band where each particular musician gets a fair share of the attention, but to be honest, i just went with whatever i thought sounded good at the time.

Hope you like it, and some constructive critiscism would be nice too.

Enjoy.

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SeeD419

2010-11-01 10:24:46

Okay

Well the beginning sounded like a space ship sound effect, and didn't really match the song that was about to play. The bass line is really boring and repetitive, as well are the drums. The piano doesn't sound good at all and there are totally awkward parts in the song that just don't sound right at all.

None of these instruments agree with each other at all, and I think that is the fundamental basis for music. That would be my main problem with this song. Nothing blends or sounds like it belongs together at all.

It almost sounds like all the instruments are just doing totally random things and random times, and it usually gets left with just that repetitive bass line playing in the background by itself with a repeating hat riff. Doesn't sound good at all in my opinion and needs a LOT of work.

Vindy

2010-10-27 20:43:16

Not bad

I like the beat and simple beat that make it kinda complex. one thing you could work on is keep the beat more organized around the beginning. they seem to be a bit all over the place. if you fix that, the song will be near perfect.

Aeroth responds:

Thanks man. I'll take that into account.