I think a bassline could add a lot to this
Finally think I bagged keeping the dynamic range to a minimum. Multiband compressors are beautiful tools.
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Thanks again for all the kind (and not so kind) reviews of my other songs, you people keep me going!
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I think a bassline could add a lot to this
Nature?
The nature sounds at the beginning was a nice touch. I just find the repeated bird tweeting annoying. o.o
The song itself is a bit simple, in terms of instruments. I'm just hearing the same saw pluck and kick drums playing again from the beginning to the end. You should use varied instruments, the song got kind of boring after a while. Maybe some pads in the background will help, or playing the melody with another synth.
Overall, it is decent. The melodies, although simple, do help give this song some action, and the kick is sufficiently 'punchy' enough. (Maybe too punchy o.o)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.