I listened to the original...
You did a good job remixing it, although yours kinda creeps me out... lol It has a creepy sense to it. Anyways I figure you realize that the original was quite repetitive, and so is this remix, but what do you expect right. Overall good job, you deserve cookies for your music. 9/10 (It's only fair, thats what I gave that other guy. :D)