Hmm

For a song called "sad story" this doesn't sound very sad...

But anyway, I found that the drums were a bit too distorted, and at no point did the melody that was initially playing stop or change, so by the three minute mark the melody got pretty repetitive.

I mean, I know it's part of the genre, but try skipping forward by 20 seconds or so until the song ends, no part of it really stands out, it just blends together.