Well, I'm glad I looked ahead to see where this came from. I think you probably did make this nicer. That is no easy task, my friend. I guess it's just so hard to NOT make this nice. It really is one of the most tender songs I've ever heard. I assume a "song" applies to all music.
It truly has the spirit of a lullaby. I wouldn't be surprised if people used it to put their kids asleep. That sort of thing never really worked for me. Everything is just so wonderful in this. I just love how good it is. You've proven great things can be made greater.