well

need more of you lol. Creative minds like yours come in short supply dude, keep on rocking and keep on creating! :)

Seems like it's holding back

I keep expecting (and hoping) for it to just break from the hold and make some hardcore music with no limits. =P

Your getting better, just still not quite there. =/

Anyway keep up the good work I'll review the rest of your audio in the near future. Best of luck!

Good, but needs something more

This is probably my least favorite of your submissions -- it feels like a strong start to a piece, but I was disappointed when more parts didn't enter afterwards. I felt like this piece would have been better served by some denser construction entering after the first 8-12 measures -- some thick, busy drum part, a droning string arrangement, some techno blips in a really high register and a couple of random sound effects accentuating the rhythm. Consider condensing this piece into an intro and then really making it explode into a bigger cascade of sound, like you do in some of your other works.

All in all, good work.