Not bad!
So, I'm not the only idiot around here messing with the demo of FL9? That's a relief.
But, to be honest, your music is quite more advanced than mine, but a bit overdone. The pad you used as a background fill-in, in example, almost overlays everything. And I didn't like the kick/clap either. Maybe you should go for something more simplistic.
Anyway, keep trying.