Well
Your headin in the right direction for sure i mean you can follow a note definatly this pretty good just needs to be more......i guess higher if you get what i mean but still pretty cheery for a low sounding song....have a 8
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Inspiration. two days of Inspiration.
I lol'd
Hey guys, it gets better around 0:44...
Lol you kinda messed up at 0:55.
Just watch that third chord c# + with c major on top... the F and the high e really clash hardcore.. we actauly the whole chord does but you fix that and you're kinda on to something.
Props for playing something live and posting it.
~ManateGod ^_^
Jesusinthebox responds:
Actually that chord was using a tritone with B and F with C on the bottom and the dissonance is there for a reason ;D. It all playes to a Bi-tonality taste. with some Rachmaninoff type sprinkled in the middle. I appreciate your appreciation.
0:55.... yeahhh i know but all my songs have a little screw up somewhere if i record it live XD. you should hear the first recordings of all my songs oh god D=...
Pretty Bad
Study up some more on harmony and keep working.
Jesusinthebox responds:
I'm playing octaves with my left hand. and a triad chord in my right. what the fuck am i supposed to play a melody with? my dick? if you want to write your accompanying piece for the melody be my guest. not all music has to have a melody. look at rap i hate it because of its melodic lacking but it has it's own audience. so if you hate it i suggest you don't review it.
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