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Well the beginning in my opinion was awful. It sounded bland and devoid of anything really musical. Then the guitar and beat came in and I was like, oh, okay we're going to rock now, that's cool. The guitar sounded decent, and the bass was good as well. The ending on this was very good and I especially liked that long high note at the end, it sounded really good. The drums could use some work though as they seemed to come off a bit cheesy, as well as the synchronized crash with the guitar over and over again. It just seemed a bit cliche to me.
It's nothing I'd listen to voluntarily because I don't find the riffs all that catchy personally, but it sounds like a complete piece and your effort has been noted as well. Keep up the good work.