yay golidguy here

The melody is Alright, but it could have a part B or C

Excellent

I really like this loop, it sounds perfect for a game I'm working on, please make a longer version!

Finish

This is seriously awesome on it's own, completing it would make it into a masterpiece.

Amazing

This is wicked right here but why are all the sexiest beats on NG always demos or short versions. >< But your talent keeps getting better. All I have left to say to you is probably consider exanding your field in hip hop, even though this is like techno modern hip hop. revamping old school hip hop like heavy percussion with jazz fusion and horns would really challenge you I believe but nice work.