Wow, fastest song I have ever made. I made the demo version yesterday. finished this morning. lol.
Anyways this really was done expiramentally. Then I decided to make a song out of it.
I like this song so much, I might make an animation too. lol.
*thoughts I had when making this song*
"You are on a top secret mission... Your mission is to steal top secret information from your enemies... The information you seek is located in the control room of their main reactor... While you did manage to make it there safely and retrieve the information... The security notices that it has been breached... All units were to evacuate the area immidiately, but the doors locked on you all around... You find an air vent to your left... You are trying to escape before the bomb goes off!!!!"
As you might notice there is a break in this song. I did that for a reason. The break lasts about 4 measures and then boom the beat comes back in. The song then reaches a coda, and dies down... This impliments that "You escaped" creating distance from the fire.
Hope you liked my song. Please Vote and Review.
Memories
Reminds me of when I messed around with random loops I made =D
pretty awesome but could use more work. If maybe I could tweak it a bit.. naw it's all yours XD good song but still needs some finishing touches. If I could suggest making it a bit echoy and see how that sounds.
lol, u and ur expiramenting. lol. I guess an echo or too would be fine.
Pretty good
Hey bro, Gamekrazzy it's good to see another of your hits :D
- Creativity/Originality-
Very creative and original, I like the experimental nature of this piece. I know that by nature you have a lot of experience in this area, buddy, and to be honest, I like it when the hard rock drums come in sort of.
I wouldn't call it jazz, but hey.
- Soul -
The soul of this piece is dramatic and espionage-like, which I like. I've made a few in this vibe too. The timing is very off, which creates a sense of urgency in my opinion. That added to by arps. You've done quite well in this regard, but it still remains quite a jilted and ungroovy tune. More like a barely bearable one. It's still good though.
- Entertainment -
To be honest, I mean I liked it the first time, but then listening to it over and over again in some sort of loop would be kind of annoying. Video game music you want to sort of be underwhelming and sort of a good undercurrent, not the overpowering nature of this one. It's almost like an assault on the ears, and I mean that in the best of ways.
- Professionalism -
I'd still like to hear some reverb in there krazzy, even though you're not too much of a big fan, i'd think.. I like the tune though, but it doesn't seem as professional as you could be, such as in "Mysterical". Now that was pro.
- Reviewer's Tilt -
I'm ya bro, Krazzy, but there's much to be improved on on this. And you can still remain in the espionage theme. It's pretty good though, and I wouldn't mind it in a game, just I know you have a lot of potential. Thanks, dude
- Creativity/Originality: 9/10
- Soul: 7/10
- Entertainment: 3/10
- Professionalism: 5/10
- Reviewer's Tilt: 5/10
OVERALL SCORE: 5.8/10
ROUNDED SCORE: 6/10
VERDICT: Pretty good
-SpXer-
lol, yeah u got my message then. :D As you might notice I changed my mind on this being videogame music. So honestly I never ment for it to be a piece that repeats here. lol. As far as Jazz. This is not one bit jazz. I actually took a jazz tune that I was trying to work on, and messed with the Arpeggio, thus creating the feel of this song, losing it's swing. Anyways thanks for the review. I really appreciate how u understand that although not as professional as I know it could be, it is not a bad song. Maybe if u didn't think it was going to be in a videogame ur thoughts would have been different, but hey, it's alright I can see how you would be confused coming from my little loop/demo.
Something's off about it
Judging from your responses to the last two reviews, I know you'll probably disregard everything I say and excuse yourself from my review, but that's okay.
I feel like the electric guitar was very much out of place among the more classical instruments. It really threw off the tone of the song, and little emotional effect. If it were louder and more clean sounding, it could have had a tremendous effect, but unfortunately, the attempt fell flaccid.
Maybe you could try changing the mood of the song with the instruments already in play, or change the note structure a bit before throwing in the guitar. That would be more effective for changing the mood than throwing in a bad sounding guitar and drums that are playing the same notes as every other instrument.
But that's just my opinion, and I think you'll improve when you get more practice with it, especially with mood changing.
7/10
lol, yeah... Im going to ignore ur review. I told u already, and I will tell u again. I was using premade instruments in the FL-Studio, if you don't like the way an electric guitar sounds, don't come crying to me about it. As far as everything else. You are right I disregard. From what I see here. You obviously did not read the way my story was going, because if you had u would have realized "OMG its a bomb!" from ur top secret mission is not a fluid motion but instant. And out of curiousity what do you mean by drums playing the same notes as every other instrument?
Exaggerated
Playing with pitch is fun, but it's better not to exaggerate it like it was done in this track.
The whole song is quite simple, only the rhytm and leads change. I believe, it would be done much better if it was given more work.
Playing with pitch is fun indeed. But really all I did was add an arpeggio effect to a jazzy bass tune, that u actually might recoginze. I created the second part by harmonizing with it. I am glad of ur oppinion. And maybe I will see what I can do about a better version then this. BTW, I really did not exaggerate the pitch. I set the Arpeggio pitch level to 2 as well as repeat to slow it down. I then moved time and the other option just barely. You are right it is simple, but alot of good beats are. Thank you.
A bit weird..
I find the instruments a bit weird and off timing, but despite it, it still has a great beat.
IMO, I feel this song can have a bit more bass. That's in my opinion. =)
This is still pretty good, though, Hope your future songs will be better!
Actually check out my previous songs. their good too. lol. Most of them are probably better. The instrumments are actually an Alto Saxaphone, a guitar, clap, hat, tom, and electric guitar. The Alto Sax had an Arpeggio. Basically toying with the pitch. The Electric Guitar also was done doing the same thing.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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