I like it

he he

i love this song . i will play it at work so the young ones will like the nead that i am . hahahaha great job

GREAT!

thanks for the great song keep up the great work dude

Fantastic!

Hey bud,

I really liked this song. This may amount to a whole lot of nothing but as a budding entrepreneur, (Entrepreneurs are always budding so far as I'm concerned hahah) I've considered branching into media and specifically terrestrial radio. Independent, talented artists like you would, I think, be the premise for such a pilot project and I would sincerely hope you continue making good music, the kind I would love to have a chance to air in the coming year or so. People like you deserve all the exposure you can get and the best way to get it is to churn out top drawer stuff like this.

Though I felt that this song had great potential for a faster, more involved, harder kind of tempo (Think Tik Toc by Keisha maybe? I dunno.) and background sound, it frankly does really well as is and despite seeing potential for a different style, I think the bottom line on this one is that I can't possibly in good conscience complain. I must have listened to it maybe 15 times as of the time of my writing this review.

I know you said that you sing just for fun but I think if you really give it a hard shot at putting some feel n soul into it, you could make something exceptionally compelling. As is, I think actually the only thing I could earnestly criticize is that to me, it feels like something of substance is missing from your singing but again, I can't really complain as even this low point to me is still a high point in terms of overall feel.

Keep it up and keep an eye on your newgrounds account from time to time. It would be a heart breaker if I managed to get my next dream off the ground and talented folks like you turn out to be all but impossible to track down.

10/10 5/5
Keep it up!

Wow!!

I agree with josielemmings. I can easily imagine this on the radio. I don't have a lot of experience with the Audio section of Newgrounds, but I think there are a few parts that seem a bit strange to me. Sorry for being vague. Like I said before, I don't have much experience with this.