Not bad
Some parts of the song sound sort of drone-like, which sort of bothered me. Otherwise, not bad- it just needs work on those droning parts.
Please give constructive criticism, since I haven't posted any of my finished tests in forever and a half. I think it turned out good, but it just might be my idealism. Feel free to rate low if you like it, but at least give the entire song a try. I like progressive openings with lots of waiting for the song to actually start, so it starts off slow.
Not bad
Some parts of the song sound sort of drone-like, which sort of bothered me. Otherwise, not bad- it just needs work on those droning parts.
Made the synths less droning, added a bit more effects, and made all of the instruments a bit better. Among other things.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.