A dark techno beat...

What I liked> I liked that the mood this piece created was changed up about half way through. It started out with just a dark and bland kind of beat and then changed to something that was easier to listen to and also sounded better.

What I didn't like> 0:40 to about 0:53. It just sounded weird and it didn't appeal to me. Also the last 15-20 seconds were a bit rough.

What I think you could improve> I believe that there should not be a closing or outro in this piece. Because it is only just over a minuet long and goes by decently fast I don't think that an outro should be in this piece.

Overall> Keep up the good work and hopefully you can improve on this. I rated it a 4/5.