Amazing use of uncommon instruments
You do not here hear a few of these instruments commonly anywhere on NG. Unfortunately the Violin introduced at 1:58 killed EVERYTHING. It doesn't fit the mood of the song at all, and it feels like that melody is very forced and too quick. It doesn't flow smoothly like the rest of your song. Ignoring that I would like to see more interesting work like this from you in the future! Amazing work, keep going!