Once again...

Great! I must say that it is not as great as your other works, but it was good nonetheless. I must agree with CloudsOfPie on teh drums bein a bit loud.
Well im sure you now know me well enough to expect a lil soul description so here it goes!

You are in a world of darkness. Everything around you is pitchblack. You see nothing, yet you see everything. You look around, confused, scared, and lonely. At 0:19 (when the drums enter) you take your first step, when a white circular wave emits from where you stepped. You begin to walk forward, stepping to the beat of the drums which echo from everywhere as you walk. At 0:41 when the chimes come in, sparkling drops of water fall to the beat of these chimes. You begin to feel safer, more relaxed, as you walk forward with this mysterious melody playing through your head. Suddenly, (at 1:00) you are opened up into a blinding white light! Shading your eyes with your hand, you look ahead into the light. You see the light silhouette of what seems to be a beatiful woman with her hand outsrtetched to you (You are a man in this sorta dream btw). You reach out to grab her hand also, and then... nothing. Everything ends as it began.

Great song and i look forward to hearing the full version of it! Im sure the full version will give me another description to write! Just be sure to have fun writing it :D

Nice start

its a pretty nice idea! you asked for suggestions?
- the drums are a bit too loud compared to the melody in the first 30 seconds
- when the percussion stops (at 00:38), it feels really weird, you should create a better break
- the bell-like sound is awesome when it kicks in, maybe you can loop those and mix them a little
- a lead voice would be awesome, to create a real song instead of this background music

I loved the theme, so im looking forward to a new version with more in it! hope you find my ideas useful ;)