Not bad.
I have no idea what is with the person below me. He/She/It seems to be in middle school by the way it types.
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Keep the melody and all the other stuff, the vocals are nice for the whisper, but the "bears" voice witht he man seems to throw it off, maybe a man but whispering?
The square synth IMO is annoying, and the clapping is (sorry, but I have to say it) are terrible. You could go find yourself some better samples. Because of the rules of this website for reviewing, I can't give you a link here. I will pm you it.
I like your idea in this song. I will be willing to help you if you want.